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“There is a place only love can go.” NEEDTOBREATHE – “A Place Only You Can Go”
And if it may take you, it may consume you
Heavy hearts don’t hang but sink like cannonballs
Hope dwindles as deteriorating romantics wither
Losing love is losing yourself
Looming love is inevitable
Lasting love, rare to find
Too many traces of your imprint in my mind
Too many memories never to be made
Too few kisses that are the only way I ever wish to be paid
Is it the man in me that is not enough, or the woman in you and I’ve called your bluff?
A feverent passion is resonated from head to toe
With but a taste— I am thirsty for more
Am I weak for wanting it all?
Will my heavy heart be the reason I continue to stumble and fall?
My greatest weakness persists
Your brown eyes, I continue to miss
Unable to wish you away
To no god, but love I continue to pray
I felt you dissolving from my life
Why is it certain that darkness always follows light?
Why must I hold on hope, despite the constant torment of your memory that haunts like the numbess of dope?
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Shaggy Lamb Productions, where words are our way
Morning said:
romantic and true words.
enjoyed the expression.
🙂
clariice said:
Sad song but heartfelt emotions. Touching!
The Noiseless Cuckooclock said:
heartfelt,
strong expression lovely delivered,
Jennifaye said:
My greatest weakness persists / Your brown eyes, I continue to miss / Unable to wish you away — SWEET. The emotions are raw and honest. Thanks for sharing.
Kevin Alan Lamb said:
: ) I’ll keep it coming if you keep reading!
Rigel Ordinario said:
Wonderful poem. 🙂
The Orange Tree said:
beautiful sentiments expressed.
🙂
Ms. Peaches said:
this is a beautiful love poem! I’m so glad I dropped by! I really love these two stanzas
“Too many traces of your imprint in my mind
Too many memories never to be made”
Touching! Relatable!
Kevin Alan Lamb said:
That makes two of us! Don’t be a stranger!
magher1 said:
The last picture greatly matches the emotions expressed in a poem… I can feel your pain, these words seem to go straight from the heart. Amazing work!
Sherrie Theriault said:
great work
Nel said:
I was reading this hearing a song in my head.
And as Ms. Peaches said, it is relatable.
Jacqui BB said:
Nice penning of pain.
terri0729 said:
Extremely well written! The emotions jump off the page. I love NeedToBreathe too, by the way, and happen to have one of their first CD’s – love, love, love it!! Blessings, Terri
Purvi said:
Super fantastic penning..! The entire poem is quotable!! Loved your work. Do drop by at:
http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2011/11/27/the-doomed-dark-star-of-hope/
Jingle Poetry said:
Greetings:
Hope that you have had a great Merry Christmas.
Thanks for the delightful support along the way,
Happy New Year.
Share a piece of your poetry today at our poetry party today if you could.,
Have fun!
Sending you love and blessings.
Cheers.
xoxox